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Conversations That Captivate: A Guide to Writing Dialogue That Stands Out

One of the most important tools in your writing toolbox is dialogue. Dialogue is what brings your characters to life and helps you tell your story in a way that captivates your readers. However, writing compelling dialogue isn’t always easy. It takes practice, patience, and a good understanding of the rules and techniques that make dialogue effective. In this guide, we take a look at some tips and tricks for crafting conversations that captivate your readers and keep them engaged from beginning to end.


Dialogue is THE vital component of any story because it allows you to show rather than tell. Instead of describing a character's thoughts, feelings, or actions, you can let them speak for themselves. Dialogue also helps to break up long blocks of text and keeps the story moving forward. When done well, dialogue can reveal character, create tension, and add depth to your story.


There are two main classes of dialogue from which all other types are derived: direct and indirect. Direct dialogue is when a character speaks for themself, and their words are enclosed in quotation marks. Indirect dialogue is when a character's words are summarized or paraphrased, and there are no quotation marks. Direct dialogue is more engaging and immersive, but indirect dialogue can be useful for summarizing long conversations or conveying information quickly.

There are also many different styles of dialogue, depending on the genre and tone of your story. For example, dialogue in a mystery novel may be more formal and precise, while dialogue in a romance novel may be more emotional and poetic. It's necessary to choose a style that fits your story and your characters to ensure your story meets reader expectations and to create a more engaging narrative that your readers will enjoy.


There are several rules that should be followed when writing dialogue. First, use proper grammar and punctuation. This includes using quotation marks, commas, and periods in the right places.

Second, avoid using adverbs in your dialogue tags. Instead of saying "he said angrily," try to convey the character's emotion through their words and actions.

Third, keep your dialogue short and to the point. Long, rambling conversations can be boring and confusing for the reader.

Lastly, make sure your dialogue advances the plot or reveals something about your characters. Don't include dialogue just for the sake of it.


Writing realistic dialogue is often one of the biggest challenges for many writers. To make your dialogue sound authentic, you need to pay attention to the way people speak in real life. Listen to conversations around you and take note of things like sentence structure, slang, and tone of voice. You can also read books or watch movies that have dialogue that you admire.

Another way to make your dialogue sound realistic is to use contractions. People rarely speak in formal language, so using contractions like "don't" instead of "do not" can make your dialogue feel more natural. You should also try to avoid using big words or technical jargon unless it fits the character's personality or profession. We can’t have our characters sounding like robots, can we? (Unless they are, of course.)


One of the best ways to reveal a character’s… character is through their dialogue. The way a character speaks can tell us a lot about their personality, background, and motivations. For example, a character who speaks in short, clipped sentences may be angry or impatient, while a character who speaks in long, flowery sentences may be poetic or romantic.

You can also use dialogue to show how characters interact with each other. For example, a character who is nervous or intimidated may stumble over their words or avoid eye contact, while a character who is confident and in control may speak more assertively. By paying attention to the way your characters speak, you can create a more nuanced and believable portrayal of them.


Dialogue can also be used to create tension and conflict in your story. When characters have conflicting goals or beliefs, their conversations can become heated and emotional. This can add drama and suspense to your story and keep your readers engaged.

One useful way to create tension is to use subtext in your dialogue. Subtext is the hidden meaning or underlying message behind a character's words. For example, a character who says "I'm fine" may actually be feeling angry or upset (Much like my wife often does when I’ve said something foolish.) By using subtext, you can create a sense of tension and uncertainty that keeps the reader guessing.


Dialogue tags are the words that follow a character's dialogue and identify who is speaking. While dialogue tags are often necessary, they also become repetitive and distracting if overused. Instead of using "he said" or "she said" every time a character speaks, try to use action beats or description to identify the speaker.

Formatting is also important when it comes to dialogue. Make sure your dialogue is easy to read by using proper spacing, indentation, and punctuation. Use a new paragraph each time a new character speaks, and avoid using long blocks of dialogue without any breaks.


If you find yourself struggling struggling to craft believable and engaging dialogue creation, don’t feel bad. Many writers experience this problem. There’s just something about writing discourse that is difficult to get just right. As the old adage goes, “Practice makes perfect.” To improve your dialogue-writing skills, try some of these exercises:

  1. Write a conversation between two characters who have conflicting goals or beliefs.

  2. Write a conversation where one character is lying or keeping a secret.

  3. Write a conversation where the characters are speaking in code or using subtext.

  4. Write a conversation where the characters are speaking a different language or using a dialect.


Crafting conversations that captivate your readers is an essential part of storytelling. By following the rules and techniques outlined in this guide, you can create dialogue that is engaging, realistic, and revealing of your characters. Remember to pay attention to the way people speak in real life, use subtext and tension to keep the reader engaged, and format your dialogue properly for readability. With practice and patience, you can become a master of dialogue and take your writing to the next level.

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Written by:

Joshua Adams

Senior Editor

Huntsville Independent Press



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